My Sister Vayne
My sister Vayne is my favourite sister. Vayne is my favorite because she looks after me, by making my lunch sometime, buying my lunch. She keeps me busy by helping me with homework and my Sunday School homework too. She works at Farro thats a supermarket for rich people.
I have 4 things that I need to do to fix my writing because I'm a year 6 and the 4 things that I need to fix is it needs to Makes sense and to have Punctuate and to have one main idea and to have Juicy word. :)
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